I don't know a good title...mostly RAnDoM

I have been reading, like A LOT!
YeS! A LOT!
I've been trying to write but within the last week I've been kinda...slow about it. This sucks.
I want to get this book finished mostly to get it out of my head. But I also want to do a good job and write something people will like. So there are flips sides to the coin. There always is I suppose.
My most recent excursion has been through Kristen Ashley's Fantasyland series. Wildest Dreams, The Golden Dynasty and Fantastical. 
I'm not big on otherworldly things and crazy stuff like vampires and werewolves but thankfully this doesn't have those but it does take place in another world with witches, curses, a place where birds speak and crazy things happen.
That said, I freakin LOVED these books!
I have officially read Thirty (30) - yes THIRTY of Kristen Ashley's books. I'm thinking I need to open my mind to her other books. And I am going to. I'm a little nervous to open my mind up to the genies, vampires, werewolves, ghosts and such BUT I'm going to do it! Then she has more she is releasing soon, therefore I'll get my KA fix soon enough without all the crazy shizz happening.

Anyhow if you haven't, please go over and check out my prologue and Chapter 1 of Surviving on Fiction Press. I need reviews badly. Someone needs to tell me if my writing is halfway decent.
Here is the link:
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3149021/1/Surviving

It will take you to chapter 1. But you should really read the prologue first. It is easy to change chapters on your device.
please, please, please go check it out.

love ya peeps,

J.L. Sprague